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The chart below shows the number of residents affected by different types of noises during the day and night in urban and rural areas in a particular area in the UK in 2020.

主體分段方法1：一圖一段

主體分段方法2：按照【噪音類別】分段（本篇文章采用此種分段方法）

主體1：traffic、train

主體2：aircraft、industry

開頭段

The bar charts compare the numbers of people affected by four types of noise during the daytime and at night in urban and rural areas of a particular region in the UK in 2020.

概述段

Overall, traffic wasthe dominant sourceof noise in both urban and rural areas.In addition, all four types of noiseaffected more peopleduring the daytimethanat night, with urban figures consistentlyexceedingthose for rural areas.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 城鄉(xiāng)居民受交通噪音最嚴(yán)重

- 城鄉(xiāng)居民白天受噪音影響都高于晚上

- 城市受到噪音影響的居民數(shù)量高于鄉(xiāng)村居民

Body paragraph 1

Traffic noiseaffected the greatest number of peoplein both areas.In the daytime, 64 million urban residents were disturbed,almost twice the corresponding figure forrural areas (34 million).During the night, fewer people were affected, with the figures falling to 48 million in cities and 24 million in rural areas.Train noise affected similar numbers ofpeople during the day and at night, with 10 million and 8 million in cities,compared with8 million and 6 million respectively in rural areas.

思路要點(diǎn)：traffic，train

- traffic：城鄉(xiāng)影響居民數(shù)量都最大，白天影響64million城市居民，大約是鄉(xiāng)村居民的2倍(34million)；晚上分別影響48million和24million

- train：白天、晚上影響到的人數(shù)差距較小，城市受影響的居民大約為9million，鄉(xiāng)村大約為7million

Body paragraph 2

The other two sources of noiseaffected fewer residentsacross both areas.During the daytime, 4 million urban dwellers were exposed to aircraft noise, with the figure dropping sharply to just 1 million at night.Similarly, in rural areas, 1 million people were affected by aircraft noise at night, which was half the daytime figure. Industrial noisehad the smallest impact overall, affecting only 1 million people during the daytime and 0.25 million at night in urban areas,whereasno rural residents experienced this source of noise at either time of day.

思路要點(diǎn)：aircraft、industry

- aircraft、industry影響到的城鄉(xiāng)居民較少

- aircraft：白天影響4 million城市居民，是晚上的4倍；類似地，晚上也有1 million鄉(xiāng)村居民受到影響，是白天的一半

- industry：是城市中影響最小的噪音源，白天晚上分別影響1 million、0.25 million; 鄉(xiāng)村白天晚上都無人受到影響